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Burning Phoenix

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Complete Comic Summary:
The year is 2085 In a Post Apocalypse Era, in 2075 at the age 15 years old Carl Jones is viewed somewhat like a modern day Leader, Activist, Revolutionist Sentenced to life in prison for Resource Theft ( Food & Water ). He is chose by the his envious prison warden to be a scientific sacrifice for a military government super soldier project by a shell - corporation called Cyber Tek Labs a military secret faction. Over 50 years in the making. A Project called Operation: Burning Phoenix. The initial experiment was ruled a failure, after Carl Jones dies for 12.5 minutes. All hell breaks loose. He breaks out of tritanium restraints ( the newest and hardest metal known to man found on mars ) and reeks havoc, all the guards and scientist are dead. Carl Jones is free melting the walls like they were made out of clay. Code 7 is the highest and it is called to the top command level. Android officers are dispersed from all 100 miles radius locations. 600 to be exact. A secret is loose with a 5 trillion budgeted weapon inside of him. Lost in the desolate far off area once know as New York now desert area 6. Carl has no consciousness as his body is taking over, eyes engulfed with flames and a path of destruction is made. Explosions, androids, soldiers body parts, vehicles , hover tanks, choppers and jets are destroyed.

About 2 days journey away a blind young woman named Saachi 25 years old prophet at the age 5 has had visions of a hero half enemy coming to save earth since she was 8 . Her village forbids her to leave afraid for her safety. But knowing her place she leaves disregarding the elders wishes she and a friend journeyed off to find this hero of her visions. And they walk traveling through 113 degree heat And extreme desert storms led by hope in finding this Savior.

Meanwhile Carl is introduced to this powerful being inside of him. He actually has a conversation with this being called Coraak. A third generation alien that only can grow and live in a host growing on the chest platelet attaching it’s thin tentacles to every nerve in the host body mostly covering the spin and brain in a bone like material unknown to man. Hightnened brain functions ,strength and speed over 100%. The alien shuts down Carl control when ever it feels its in harm.
Meanwhile the androids tracks the “Prey” and attacks. And Coraak shows its minimal power of heat and telekinesis. Tossing tanks like paper to the wind, setting fire to objects with the blink of an eye.
Later in search for "Prey" the blind prophet girl Saachi friend Raija sacrifices his life when 2 desert pirates the Berserkers try to rob and kidnap them both. Raija fights them off but is stabbed and later dies. Now all alone and in tears. The smell of smoke scares her but she finds Carl passed out on the ground. And a feeling she can’t explain she knows he is the one she has been searching for. After hours of sleep he awakens of no recollections of what happened. While the girl talks Trekhaak talks as well. Trying to keep Carl from listening to her.
She talks about the spirit and soul are two but of one body and how we all have battles within we must win in order to change the battles around us. And he remembers the meditation he taught his inmates, his friends. And through that he controls his body again. Now with limitless powers at his disposal. The military regrouped and in the meanwhile realizing the DNA works they move to stage two adding mind control chips to control all thought process and creating five elite super soldiers to find and destroy Carl code name Prey.
Meaning while on Mars truths are unfolding as the wealthy are hostages on there safe heaven from earth and are being picked off one by one. Transmission has been taking over by Mars inhibitors. And now they are in need of rescue. But back on earth a war is going on and it’s against a army versus one man half enemy.
Later the military finds out that Mars had intelligent life form laying dormant underground it is too late. And even more too add the alien DNA that the military placed in Carl and the soldiers were part of the aliens ploy to rid earth of humans so that they could take over our planet. Years of waiting for earth to be the right temperature and climate for their final invasion.
The super soldiers turn on the military and start wiping out all forces. So now the once hunted Prey must save us all for a final confrontation of powers against powers. The blind girl instructs Carl on his battle. You have something they will never possess. A spirit and a soul. Carl does battle and wins.
But now he must leave earth to have a showdown with the ones that started it all.

And this is only the beginning........

Mooreimage Studios Copyright 2007 Terrence J Moore
Protected By the World Writer's Guild of America
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